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...Help me...

I'm locked in this place. Tormented and alone. With my head lulling against the soft white fabric of the walls. I'm listening to the screaming coming from the other rooms. The sounds of anguish, hate and lunacy.

...Free me...

I don't want to stay here. Not in this place. Not with these people. They think I'm mad, crazy. But I know that's not true. They are the crazy one's here. Not me.

...Don't judge me...

Just set be free. I promise I'll be a good boy. No more killing, no more raping. No more death at my hands. But please, please. Get me out of here, let me go. I swear I'll change.

...Don't keep me here...

In this crazy place, with the needles. The injections, the pills and the happy, shiny blinding white lights. With the jackets that fit so snugly, and make you hug yourself forever..

..You can't bind me..

Don't you know who I am? You can't keep me here. Me, an Angel of heaven. With my soot black wings, and devilish charm. Ah, but you think I'm mad. That's why I'm here. Why you've locked me up with these crazy bastards, who scream in the night, and cut themselves.

...I'll get out...

I'll play it nicely, co-operate. Be a good boy, and sneak my way out of here. I'll go along, do what you say. And when you let me out, the moment your back is turned. I'll pull your still beating heart from your body.. And feed it to you.

...Oh the madness...

It bubbles away, just below the surface. But I can calm it. I can play your game. I'll be a normal boy. A normal human. And you'll fall into my clutches and become my pray. For hell hath no fury.

...Like an Angel scorned...
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Rawr!

Was rather pissed off when I wrote this. Thing I just needed to vent and get all the bullshit out of my system. So I used this piece to do just that.

It's written from the first person view of one of my characters called, Angelique. Who is, in case you hadn't guessed. An Angel in a mental asylum.

'Lique, as his known suffers from various mental health problems. But the real crazies never do beleive they are crazy.

Anyways, enjoy and junk.
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This is really good Nii!

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The truth is hiding in your eyes...
And it's hanging on your tongue,
Just boiling in my blood
But you think that i cant see-
What kind of man that you are?
If you're man at all...
I will figure this one out
On my own...
Woohoo!! Nicely done :D..For venting you must have been pissed!!..I loved it :hug: :love:

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" In a sane world, insanity is the only form of freedom "
Yeah... this is pretty good. (Dude, what were you pissed about?)

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Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
Thankya kindly.
And what am I usually pissed about? :D Fucking men.

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The poet is a liar who always tells the truth

When the World ends, collect your things. You're coming with me..

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Thanks muchly! :D
And I really was pissed, but I'm glad you love it. :) I tend to think angry writing can sometimes be the best kind.

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The poet is a liar who always tells the truth

When the World ends, collect your things. You're coming with me..

[link]
Thankya kindly. :D

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The poet is a liar who always tells the truth

When the World ends, collect your things. You're coming with me..

[link]
Ah. :| Yeah. :XD: Typical. Oh well. Soon you'll be fucking men. :P :D :D

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Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
Heh. I doubt that muchly. :D

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The poet is a liar who always tells the truth

When the World ends, collect your things. You're coming with me..

[link]
You never know. :|

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Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
Welcome! :D Angry writing is real and carrys with it sometimes loads of substance and yes shows a tough kind of kindness :)

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" In a sane world, insanity is the only form of freedom "

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